Monday, May 7, 2012

Narrative writing

WALT: write a narrative story, using descriptive passages and creativity

Spotlight

I ran, pushing myself through the dense plantation. Moonlight shone on my shivering body.
It was midnight and not a soul in sight. I stopped. Someone or something was near me! I crouched down until the noise went off into the darkness.

A shrill scream broke the silence, they were rounding us up like cows to the slaughterhouse, and they had found another one.
I lay prone not daring to move, my eyes to the deck of the house, my heart stopped. A solitary figure was approaching.
So close to me I could hear his breathing.
“Spotlight” the voice said.

By George

1 comment:

  1. WOW!!! That was so good it felt like I was in there too.
    Jacob

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