Monday, May 14, 2012

Swiiming Races By Sarah

Swimming Races
I got 3 yellow ribbons because I went in a swimming competition .
I went in 5 races.
I came second.
It was good fun.


  1. @Sarah
    It is great that you came second but I would like for you to put in more detail into your writing on your blog. I would like if you could tell us what races you raced in or what it was like. Next time you could do a recount of what you did but use descriptive words. Good job though.
    Maddison Berwick Fields PS Australia

  2. Congrats

    you must be fast swimmer have you got any first place ribbons before?

    From Zakk berwick fields

  3. To Sarah,
    That is good that you got three yellow ribbons Are they the second place ribbons?
    Do you enjoy swimming?

    Hope to hear back from you.

    From Kaylah (Berwick Fields)

  4. Hey Sarah

    we have an good swimmer in our grade as well he made it into national and guess what he came first in all of the challenges so we think he done so good so good luck for your swiming career

  5. Well done sara sounds like you've done a magnificent job looks like you got alot of ribbons. Also coming second is even better well done! Keep going. Maybe next time put a bit more writing and not to much short sentences but appart from that GREAT JOB!

  6. Great job Sarah looks like you had a good time and you got a lot of ribbons. Also coming second is fantastic! Keep it up. Next time you should put a bit more writing in to your sentences other in that WELL DONE!
    Jake,BerwickFields,Australia where it shines

  7. Hi Sarah,
    Grate job on your swimming and coming 2nd. We have a really good swimmer like you in our class and his name is Jake Duggan. He is only 12 and he has bet a 18 old person.His style of swimming is breast stroke.But still AWSOME job to you.
    From Ashan,Berwick Fields Primary School,Australia

  8. @Sarah

    I'm happy to see that other country also do swimming at school. It sounds really interesting but I want to know more about it.

    From Zara,Berwick Fields P.S. Australia


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